Subject	well, you ain't exactly Shakespeare but it's not bad at all.
Posted by	Keepsake on November 30, 2000 at 5:15 AM
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In Reply To	SERIOUS READERS ONLY...damm Gramma police is gonna be on my posted by dooZ on November 30, 2000 at 04:49 AM
Message	You might wanna review it in terms of "kicked his ass" and like phrases ("bitch route")... find a more sophisticated alternative way to put it and you should be fine. If I were you, I'd also cut down on the technical specs unless your teacher is knowledgeable with cars. Is that a real story?
Follow Ups	SERIOUS READERS ONLY...damm Gramma police is gonna be on my - dooZ 04:49:44 11/30/00 well, you ain't exactly Shakespeare but it's not bad at all. - Keepsake 05:15:56 11/30/00 For ur Eng class? Where is the thesis statement? - FLY 1 (DallaZ) 05:37:13 11/30/00 Same thoughts! (n/m) - dharma 07:03:08 11/30/00 his thesis is his first sentence - Got Boost? 09:55:25 11/30/00 good reading, for us...>>> - Cinzy 08:07:20 11/30/00 Read that in slo-mo to depict my NA v. GSR v. Celica GTS (n/m) - aZinAZ 08:40:52 11/30/00 lol! (n/m) - my91z(D-town) 09:21:45 11/30/00 The gravitational pull?? get that laying in bed. - Ken (Aruba) 10:09:14 11/30/00 BTW...90-96 would be 'seven' years straight, not 'six'! (n/m) - 5150Z 10:11:51 11/30/00 I dont think it made the list in 96' (n/m) - LedZep(93SilverNA) 12:01:27 11/30/00 Copyright infringement? - John P. 10:30:42 11/30/00 whats this world comming to. Disney sued a>>> - aZinAZ 10:35:08 11/30/00 disney is like the anti-christ (n/m) - genic (konig whore) 10:37:29 11/30/00 Didn't Disney sue the anti-christ once, too? (n/m) - aZinAZ 11:22:31 11/30/00 rotflmao!! (n/m) - Daniel ZX 11:45:27 11/30/00 In his defense - JSlade8581 11:03:10 11/30/00 nice writing... very entertaining and not boring at all! (n/m) - znart 11:42:45 11/30/00 Good story!! (n/m) - ChazzB 12:05:37 11/30/00 Can't compare NEW prices on theirs and used price on yours>> - qqqqqqqman 14:33:55 11/30/00 ya, TTs in '96 were near $50k (n/m) - thunderZ 20:22:48 11/30/00 Re: glad u all enjoyed the story and of course on tt.net u - dooZ 21:27:12 11/30/00
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